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Tuesday 24 July 2012

When Black Sees Red

"Greedstar! Greedstar!" The black tom lifted his head as Troutclaw ran over to his leader. By the way he was panting, he had been sure to run as fast as he could back to camp.
"What is it?" Greedstar demanded.
"There have been recent scents of a DuskClan cat on our side of the border! I was on Redclaw's patrol when we came across it. He sent me back to inform you."
Greedstar's silver eyes narrowed into furious slits. "How dare they cross our border!" He snarled as he stood up. "Where is Redclaw?"
"He's waiting with Wolffur, Riverpaw, and Oakpaw near the border."
"Very well, tell them that I'll be sending a patrol soon." Greedstar made his way to the Highstone and bunched his muscles as he prepared to leap. He scrambled onto the large stone and let out an angry yowl.
Troutclaw was about to ask why another patrol was needed when cats began filing out of their dens; filling the clearing like a shadow.

"Cats of StellarClan!" Greedstar began. He didn't both hiding the anger out of his voice. "DuskClan has been scented inside of our borders. Today will be the day we attack!"
There were furious hisses and angry remarks. Tails lashed with anticipation. They knew this day would come sooner or later.
He waited as it quieted down. "I will lead a patrol myself with Pebblesplash, Silverpaw, Hawkeye, Troutclaw, Sunbelly, Sleetpelt, Blackpaw, and Mousefur. Redclaw, Tanpaw, Wolffur, Oakpaw, and Riverpaw are already waiting. Those whose names haven't been called will remain in camp. Now let's go."
Greedstar leaped from the Highstone and flicked his tail, signalling for his patrol to leave.

"One second, Greedstar!" Shiningsong called as she walked over to him. "I must do something first." Grief flickered in her icy blue eyes, but she quickly shook her head. She knew her time was almost up, and she had to do something.
"Very well," Greedstar nodded and took a step back. He noticed the medicine cat didn't look well, but she had been nursing all of the sick cats.
"Thank you," she whispered before standing in front of the Highstone. "Heatherpaw, come here." Although she was confused, she obeyed her mentor.
"I, Shiningsong medicine cat of StellarClan, call upon my warrior ancestors to look down upon this apprentice. She has trained hard to understand the way of a medicine cat, and with your help she will serve her Clan for many moons."
"Heatherpaw, do you promise to uphold the ways of a medicine cat, to stand apart from rivalry between Clan and Clan, and to protect all cats equally, even at the cost of your life?"
Heatherpaw was even more surprised. She had recently joined the Clan and barely knew anything! She still had so much to learn and she was already receiving her full medicine cat name!
"I do," she meowed and frowned as her voice faltered.
"Then by the powers of StarClan I give you your true name as a medicine cat. Heatherpaw, from this moment you will be known as Heathercloud. StarClan honours your kindness and patience."

"Congratulations, Heathercloud." Greedstar dipped his head in respect at the newly named medicine cat.
"Now," he said. "We must go."
The black tom flicked his tail once more and raced out of the camp. He heard the soft thumping of paws behind him as he lead his Clan to their first Clan versus Clan battle. While running towards DuskClan, Redclaw's patrol of Wolffur, Oakpaw, and Riverpaw joined.
The large patrol passed the borders and ran deeper into enemy territory. Once they were outside of the camp, Greedstar let out a ferocious battle cry and dove into the camp.


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[Okay, so there's a couple of things I need to know. First, I need to know if any ceremonies need to be made. Like kits to apprentices or apprentices to warriors. Let me know in the 'Updates' page.
Second, Echo, I need to know Heatherpaw's warrior name. I'm fairly bad at coming up with some myself. ^^;
Lastly, I want to make a human/vampire blog, but is anyone willing to join? It will be based off of 'Vampire Knight' (you don't need to watch it to join) and will consist of an academy for two classes of students. The first class consisting of the 'Day Class' which include humans and (unlike Vampire Knight) vampire hunters; or at least vampire hunters in training. The second class is the 'Night Class' which includes vampires and vampires only. I will add more information if I create the blog.
Also, I'd like to apologise for my absence. I had a really hectic week helping my sister add the finishing touches to her wedding and I was also briefly locked out of my account.
Oh, yeah! I'd like to add that the title is called "When Black Sees Red" means that black [the shade of Greedstar's pelt] sees red; in this case, he's furious.

Edit:
Oh, yes! One more thing. The DuskClan cat they scented was Rowanfur. After his little run-in with Mousefur.]

43 comments:

  1. Sunbelly sunk his claws into the ground with anticipation. Finally some excitement... I'll show those DuskClan cats what we're made of! Without a moments hesitation, he plunged into DuskClan's camp, caterwauling as he bared his teeth.

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  2. (Lol, Ashpaw's sick, she can't go! :P)

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  3. [Can her name be Heathercloud?]

    Troutclaw waited for his leader's order,when it came he plunged into duskclan's camp with his clan mates and attacked the first warrior he saw.

    Oakpaw growled and plunged into the camp with a furious yowl.

    Mousefoot frowned and looked at Willowfeather,her tail tip twitching worriedly."Do you think we should gather the kits into the nursery?"she asked the other queen.

    Heathercloud smiled,but her eyes shined worriedly.At least she'll reamain my mentor for many moons yet.she thought and took a few breaths to calm herself.She paded over to the medecine cat's den to begin getting some herbs ready for war injuries.

    Pinepaw frowned and paced infront of the apprentice's den.Worry for his stuborn idiotic brother nagging at him.Oakpaw wasen't the most cautious cat he knew,and he couldn't help but imagine his brother trying to take on a warrior twice his size.

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  4. [Stella: Oh, right! Okay, I'll fix that.
    Echo: I never would've thought about that! I love the name. ^^
    Also, I couldn't help it. I made Cross Academy if anyone cares to join. http://crossacademy-alado.blogspot.ca/p/join.html ]

    Smokepelt sat outside of the warriors den. "Pinepaw, stop pacing. You'll worry the kits. Why don't you help Heathercloud? Shiningsong went with the patrol and she'll need help with Ashpaw if injured warriors come back."

    Hawkeye stayed close to Redclaw. Now that Vanstar was gone, and she wasn't a particular fan of Greedstar, she was more worried about her friend.

    Greedstar ignored all of DuskClan's warriors and headed straight for the cat that refused the herbs that would've saved Vanstar. Hatred in his silver eyes as he lunged at Ghoststar.

    Although she had been hostile towards Oakpaw, she stayed close to him, Blackpaw, and Silverpaw; the only other apprentices on the patrol. She was still a fairly new apprentice and this was her first time fighting. She had to admit, it was rather terrifying.

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  5. Willowfeather nodded. "Just in case DuskClan thinks we left the camp unguarded and decide to do an attack." She looked around for Steelkit and Soulkit while Mousefoot herded Lilackit and Sunkit into the nursery. "Steelkit! Soulkit!" She called.

    Sunbelly easily swatted away an opposing cat, feeling the satisfaction of muscle thumping on the ground. "You made our leader die!" He hissed, raking his claws against a cat's muzzle, sending crimson drops to the forest floor.

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  6. Soulkit emerged from the nursery entrance. "I'm here," he squeaked. "I don't know where my brother is though." He looked around and sighed. Vanstar and Wishfeather were gone. Riverpaw was risking her life to fight DuskClan and Steelkit was hiding from him. He never felt so alone.

    Steelkit sat in the back of the medicine cat's den; in the herb storage. He figured the herbs would hide his scent and, unlike his younger brother, all he wanted was to be left alone.

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  7. Pinepaw noded his tail tip still flicking,he paded over to the medecine cat's den.

    Heathercloud's gaze widened and then softened as she saw her brother."Smokepelt told me to come help you out.He said my worrying,would worry the kits."he explained.Heathercloud noded,"He was right.I'm glad for the help.I'll go get the herbs we'll need to start preparing some poultices."she mewed and paded into the herb storage.She frowned,and tried to remember witch ones to take.She paded over to the back of then den where Shiningsong kept the dried oak leaves.She blinked when she saw Steelkit there."What are you doing in here?"she asked.

    Mousefoot looked at soulkit from where she sat near the entrence,"Soulkit,are you alright?"She asked softly.

    Sunkit and Lilackit whispered to each other in the nest the shared with their mother.

    Oakpaw hissed and leaped at a black apprentice.

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  8. (I guess I'll just comment ask my DuskClan cats here o.o)

    Heatherpaw let out a ferocious hiss, and bowled into Oakpaw. "Stay away from my clanmates!" She snarled, her pelt puffed up so she looked twice her size. How dare they infiltrate our camp!

    Rosenight widened her eyes as a flood of StellarClan cats made their way through the camp wall. "Fernpaw! Does anyone look badly hurt?" The medicine cat asked as she shuffled through the herb storage, getting ready if there are any brutal injuries.

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  9. "I'm fine!" Soulkit perked up a bit as he heard the queen.

    Steelkit looked up, glaring at Heathercloud. "I'm hiding from Soulkit. Don't tell him or anyone where I am."

    "Leave him alone!" Riverpaw snarled as she leaped to Oakpaw's side.

    Rabbitpaw stayed close to his mentor. His eyes narrowing as he flung himself at a nearby StellarClan cat.

    Stoneclaw was about to call over his apprentice when Redclaw crashed into him.

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  10. Heatherpaw looked at the she-cat with hatred in her eyes. "Leave him along? Leave our Clan alone! We didn't ask you to attack!" She bared her teeth, arching her back. "Now get out of here! We don't want a bunch of fox-hearts stinking up our camp." She spat.

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  11. Mousefoot smiled gently."Good,i'm glad.If ever your not,don't ever hesitate to come tell me, ok?"She asked.

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  12. Oakpaw glanced furiously at Heatherpaw as he continued fighting the other apprentice.

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  13. Mousefur leapt into battle, wondering if this was get fault, like she wondered. If she hadn't stayed behind to catch something, she wouldn't have run into Rowanfur. Starclan, what I'd I have to fight him? I'm not sure I could do it.. She thought as she slashed blindly at a Duskclan cat.

    Silverpaw hissed at Heatherpaw. "Us, fox-hearts? We didn't cross your border! You cossed ours!" she ran off to help Blackpaw as her sister engaged another apprentice.

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  14. Rabbitpaw leaped on Redclaw, using his black claws to dig into the warriors back.

    He broke away from Redclaw and whirled around when he spotted Mousefur. Narrowing his eyes, he leaped at her. "How dare you come into our camp!"

    "O-okay," Soulkit meowed quietly.

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  15. "What?" Heatherpaw snarled angrily as she streaked after the she-cat. "We didn't cross your border! You're the ones that started this war!" She slashed at the silver she-cats muzzle.

    Sunbelly lifted his nose in the air, scenting for the medicine cat den, though it was difficult with all the cats mangled scents. "It's over there." He meowed and gruffly, and he and a few others made their way towards it. As he shouldered his way through the entrance, he let out a hiss.

    Rosenight's eyes widened with shock as she saw a small group of cats enter the den. They wouldn't dare... "Attacking a Medicine Cat! StarClan would be ashamed!" The calico she-cat stood her ground, staring at the group of cats with eyes like chips of ice.

    "We're not here to attack you." Sunbelly growled, unsheathing his claws for a moment. "Just give us the herbs our Clan needs."

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  16. Fernpaw looked up in shock but fluffed up her fur.

    Mousefur growled. "How do you expect me to say no to my leader?" She snarled in a low voice. "I had no choice."
    (that was Rowanfur, right?)

    In an instant Silverpaw and Blackpaw turned thier attention to Heatherpaw and began driving her back. "We found Duskclan scent on our side of the border. We wouldn't be fighting right now if you stayed to your territory or given us those herbs!" Blackpaw snarled.

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  17. Rowanfur looked around quickly before lowering his voice. "Why did Greedstar even come?"
    Before letting her answer, Stoneclaw threw himself at Mousefur in attempt to protect Rowanfur, or so he thought. "Leave our camp!"
    "Stoneclaw! No!" Rowanfur's eyes widened with horror.

    Hawkeye followed Sunbelly into the medicine cat's den. "Yes, we promise not to hurt you. We need those herbs!"

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  18. Heatherpaw reared up on her hind legs, lashing out with her front paws, claws unsheathed and glinting in the sunlight. "I don't know what you're talking about! And two against one doesn't seem fair, I thought StellarClan knew better. I guess I was wrong to overestimate a couple of mouse-brains!"

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  19. Mousefur yowled and battered Stoneclaw's belly with her hind legs, desperate to free herself. "Get off me, mouse-brain!"

    Silverpaw bared her teeth and threw herself at Heatherpaw, scratching her flanks as hard as she could. Blackpaw stopped and flattened her ears. "If you're going to insult us, leave my sister out of this! I'm able to take you on myself!" Silverpaw hissed.


    Fernpaw inched closer to Rosenight. "We have less herbs than you do! Greedstar knows that." She said.

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  20. "Don't lie to us!" Hawkeye snapped. "DuskClan has the herbs that StellarClan needs! Our clanmates our dying and you Clan is too selfish to realize it!"

    "Stoneclaw! Stop!" Rowanfur snarled as he grabbed his clanmate by the scruff and yanked him off of Mousefur.
    Stoneclaw felt himself be pulled off and wipped around, glaring at his friend. "What do you think you're doing?! Her Clan is attacking ours if you haven't noticed!"
    He shook his head. "You don't understand. Just try and not harm any StellarClan cat's. Go, before I choose to hurt you."
    Stoneclaw glared at Rowanfur, but obeyed.
    Rowanfur couldn't bring himself to look at Mousefur. "You should go to. Try to convince your clanmates. I promised I'd try to find herbs for your Clan, and I'll stick to it. Fighting won't solve anything."

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  21. "You should have seen when we were organizing the patrol at the camp. My Clanmates wil do anything for a fight." She moved to where she was right next to his ears. "They found your scent. We'll have to find somewhere else to meet." She breathed quietly.

    Fernpaw arched her back. "You Stellarclan cats are so blind! Can you not see all this rain is drowning us in our own territory? We barely have enough herbs for ourselves, much less another clan! And after this attack? I doubt we'll have anything left!" She spat. She herself was taken aback by what she had said. Usually she would let Rosenight do the talking, but lately her broken leg was making her irritable.

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  22. (I'm confrused! Are we going to RP here or at Duskclan?)

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  23. (I say here, since we already started commenting :P)

    Heatherpaw slammed her paws down on the silver she-cat, feeling the satisfaction as she clawed at her opponents back, feeling blood well beneath her claws. "What are you? Her body guard?" She hissed, launching the she-cat off of her.

    "That doesn't matter! We need those herbs more than you! You have no sickness in your Clan right now. Give us what we need!" He crept closer, though still with his claws sheathed.

    Rosenight swept her tail in front of Fernpaw, edging her back. "You are in no condition to be a in a quarrel!" She looked over at the knit of cats, her fur prickling along her spine. "Do you even know the remedy for the disease? And what makes you think we have more herbs than you do?"

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  24. [I don't know. I was RPing at both.]

    Hawkeye narrowed her eyes. She opened her mouth to explain that Shiningsong was sick as well, but quickly snapped it shut. There was no way she would allow another Clan to know that.

    Rowanfur's eyes widened with horror. "I'm at fault! I shouldn't have been so mouse-brain. I'm so sorry I got your Clan to do this. Meeting up somewhere else would be best."

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  25. Mousefur shook her head. "The attack was bound to happen sooner or later. o'll find a way to talk to you tonight." she drew away from Rowanfur and disappeared into the crowd, heart thumping. Do I have feelings for a tom from an enemy clan? she asked herself.

    Blackpaw narrowed her eyes as Heatherpaw taunted her sister. "You wish!" she exclaomed as she rammed into the she-cat on top of her sister. She raked her claws down Heatherpaw's spine. "That'll teach you to mess with us." she hissed as she bit her opponent's tail.

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  26. Heatherpaw screeched as her tail was bitten, and whirled on to the she-cat, scraping her claws against her face. "That will teach you to mess with DuskClan!" She snarled and bit down on the she-cats paw.

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  27. "You didn't want to mess with us? Why did you cross the border?" Blackpaw grit between her teeth. She yanked her paw free and kicked Heatherpaw with her hind paaws. "If there's one thing Stellarclan cats don't do, that's lie.

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  28. Rowanfur let out a sigh before going to help Rabbitpaw with Redclaw.

    Stoneclaw had ran off after attacking Mousefur and being sent away by Rowanfur. That mouse-brain! He better had a good explaination! He was shaken from his thoughts as Riverpaw leaped at him. "Get out of here!" Stoneclaw snarled as he flung her off. She landed with a heavy thud, but regained her footing. Her eyes ice cold as she glared at the enemy cat.

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  29. "Gee, well that makes up for everything!" Heatherpaw said sarcastically, rolling her eyes as she regained her footing. She flicked her paws out, scoring claw marks down Blackpaw's shoulder and flank. "You're lying! You just attacked so that you can get herbs for your pitiful Clan!"

    (Alado, should they steal the herbs or no? xD)

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  30. "We only care about you trespasssing! You liars!" Silverpaw eapt at Heatherpaw and knocked her off Blackpaw. "We wouldn't be fight if your selfish clan had given us herbs anyway!" She darted forwad and bit Heatherpaw's shoulder, drawing her claws across the apprentice's face.

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  31. Heathercloud frowned,"Alright,fine."she mewed quietly."But you can't stay in the herb storage.You can hide in the rest of the den thought."she added.

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  32. Heatherpaw changed her attention towards Silverpaw, giving deep claw marks against her exposed belly, and grabbing onto her scruff, shaking it violently. "Selfish? Yeah right! We have a right not to give you herbs, we need them more than you!"

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  33. "Yeah? I don't scent any sickness in this camp." Silverpaw hissed, freeing herself from Heatherpaw's grasp. AS soon as she had he balance again she darted underneath Heatherpaw's belly, rolled onto her back, and pushed up. She leapt onto her feet and pounced when the she-cat hit the ground, grabbing her scruff and shaking hard, like she had been shaken.

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  34. [Hmm, I don't think so. Because than I'll have a reason for Rowanfur to sneak around. ^^]

    Riverpaw's gaze remained focus, although her mind was buzzing. Why did I have to take on a warrior! She shook her head, she couldn't get distracted now. Exhaling, she charged at Stoneclaw once more, but he easily swatted her away.

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  35. Heatherpaw let herself become limp, tricking Silverpaw. As soon as she relaxed her grip, she pushed herself up, knocking the she-cat backwards. "Mousebrain! Did you even look at our territory when you invaded?" She snarled as she leaped onto her back, holding on tight as she clawed at her fur. Before Silverpaw could react, she jumped off, waiting for her next move.

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  36. Oakpaw finished off the apprentice he'd been fighting.He leaped off him,and looked around.Seeing Riverpaw and the warrior,he bounded over to her.They might not get along,but he wasen't about to watch her get hurt.He stoped beside her,and growled at the warrior.He cast a quick glace her way,before glaring angrly at Stoneheart.

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  37. "Get out of our camp!" Stoneclaw growled as Riverpaw shook her head. She had landed hard, but there was no way she was going to give up. "I'm not going to hurt you unless I have too," he snapped.

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  38. (Should one or both of the leaders lose a life in this battle? It would ignite hostilities :P)

    Pebblesplash lauched herself at Rowanfur with a yowl. "We need your herbs! Why do you refuse us?!"
    ~Pebblesplash

    "Get...out...of...our...camp!" snarled Ghoststar, raking his claws on Greedstar's soft underbelly.
    ~Ghoststar

    Ivyflight bared her teeth and positioned herself in front of the medicine den.
    ~Ivyflight

    Rainpaw bristled as she saw Heatherpaw taking on two other apprentices all by herself. "We don't to give you anything, you mange-pelts!" she hissed, stepping beside her Clanmate. "Maybe if you hadn't treated Duskclan's territory as your personal hunting grounds we would've helped you! You have no right to ask anything of us!"
    ~Rainpaw

    Sleetpelt shut his eyes. This is all my fault.
    ~Sleetpelt

    Ashpaw watched with hollow eyes from the medicine den. Because of those Duskclan cats I'm dying, she thought, narrowing her eyes.
    ~Ashpaw

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  39. Heatherpaw flashed Rainpaw a grateful look, and focused on Silverpaw. "What now, mousebrain?" She hissed, feeling more in control now that she could just focus on one opponent.

    Rosenight shielded the herb supply with her thick pelt. "I won't let you pass and get these herbs. Our Clan needs them as much as you do." Pity was nagging at her paws, but she knew that she couldn't give them any herbs. We are very low... Great StarClan, please let this battle end!

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  40. [I think just one would be good. You can have Ghoststar lose a life if you want. ^w^]

    Rowanfur was surprised as the StellarClan deputy flung at him. He couldn't just spill out his secret that he sided with StellarClan, and he couldn't just attack Mousefur's clanmate. "There may be another solution! Get your clan and leave! DuskClan's herbs are not of any use to you!"

    "Never!" Greedstar snarled furiously. "You refuse us the herbs we need, so we shall take them with force!"

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  41. Mousefur turned back to look at Rowanfur when Pebblesplash attacked him. Her eyes widened in horror but she looked away and ran at a random Duskclan cat. She couldn't help him without betraying she had been friendly with him.

    Silverpaw snarled and prepared to leap at Heatherpaw again when Blackpaw dashed out in front of her sister. "Silverpaw, we shouldn't be fighting. This battle is like being a rouge all over again." She whispered the last part in her sister's ear. "Come on. Heathercloud and Shiningsong are low enough on herbs as it is. We don't want to give them any more patients, not with the sickness." She looked over her shoulder at Heatherpaw.

    Silverpaw hissed. "If they can't even sacrifice a few herbs to save a clan in danger of dying they need to learn a lesson." She turned away from her sister and threw herself at Heatherpaw, claws aimed for her throat.

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  42. Heatherpaw was ready for the attack. She ducked, then twisted around, avoiding Silverpaw's death blow. She lashed at the she-cats pelt as she jumped past her. "I've been an apprentice long enough to know some defensive moves too." She snarled.

    (Now I don't know what they should do to the Medicine cats xD owo)

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  43. Ghoststar's eyes widened as Greedstar's teeth came down hard on his throat. He tried to gasp, but couldn't breathe. Is his plan to kill me over and over again until I'm gone and he can take Duskclan? Ghoststar bared his teeth, but the world was already going fuzzy. Sounds were fading, and then Ghoststar was gone...

    Ghoststar opened his eyes to find himself sitting in the middle of a starry semicircle. Even as he watched, the cat who gave him his ninth life turned and padded up into the stars. "What must I do?" he asked his ancestors, desperation tinging his voice. His eyes found his mother, Moonstar's, but she looked back only expressionlessly. Then, as one, the Starclan cats turned and faded into the stars.

    Ghoststar woke with a gasp. He felt dizzy and lightheaded, but otherwise okay. He jumped to his feet, narrowing his eyes at Greedstar. (If Stellarclan's still at Duskclan :P)
    ~Ghoststar

    (Rainpaw's being a meanie :P)
    Rainpaw's fur bristled. No Clan cat tries to kill in battle, only wound! She smirked at Silverpaw. "So Stellarclan's become so desperate they let in mangy rogues in?" she said. "No wonder you fight in such an...uncivilized manner!" she mewed in mock horror.
    ~Rainpaw

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